Random thoughts:
Spellcheck Monestry. It is Monastery:)

This is emailed? Should it just be the page that's served after creating a new user? Either would be fine by me, but I think some people have a problem with large mailboxes.

Perhaps a friendly request-for-use to Nathan Torkington. Can't hurt to be polite.

At the risk of lengthening a long doc perhaps, at the end, we could throw vroom a bone and mention Buy Stuff

I of course bow to wiser heads. ++tachyon and all involved.