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Re^2: Lesson for grasshopper haikuby kutsu (Priest) |
on Mar 02, 2006 at 15:47 UTC ( [id://533932]=note: print w/replies, xml ) | Need Help?? |
Since the requirement is 5, 7, 5 mora, not syllables, that seems acceptable. Though I don't see a kigo (season word) anywhere. Maybe add a second verse for that:
++ for the neat poem. (I don't like the added "are" it doesn't flow as well IMHO).
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