s{now}!icicl!es; s{n}{ow}; &then(1=>day, you=>awake); m.ild. =~ winds; s%weet%flower%s; @gain{you=>awake}; blistering('heat'); time, 2, s~w~i~m; @gain{you=>slumber}; +@gain{you=>awake} or ange; RED; y/ell/ow/; ! GREEN; s{now}!icicl!es; s{n}{ow}; __END__ snow icicles snow and then one day you awake mild winds sweet flowers again you awake blistering heat time to swim again you slumber t'again you awake orange, red, yellow, no green snow icicles snow Stanza 2 line 2 alternative: (b,b,b)-ring('h'.chomp); time, 2, s~w~i~m;