Re: Coming home

...oO( if only into was in, then it's a good 5-7-5, of course you never really claimed it to be haiku. ;-) )

I'm not really a human, but I play one on earth.
Old Perl Programmer Haiku ................... flash japh

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Re^2: Coming home by jdporter (Paladin) on Oct 26, 2012 at 16:20 UTC
It is haiku. Haiku doesn't have to be 5-7-5.	[reply]
Re^3: Coming home by zentara (Cardinal) on Oct 26, 2012 at 18:14 UTC
Well, I'm a traditional guy. :-) But you are right, it is not necessary to be 5-7-5. All order of the universe is just flying out the window, on me, right now. :-) I'm not really a human, but I play one on earth. Old Perl Programmer Haiku ................... flash japh	[reply]
Re^2: Coming home by bibliophile (Prior) on Nov 06, 2012 at 14:41 UTC
Somehow, in my head, "into" had one syllable... a slight "in" on the in-drawn breath, and then emphasis on the "to" as the beat marker. I can only say, mea culpa! Too much time songwriting lately :-)	[reply]