in reply to Workday

I like, I like a lot. I should try my hand at some perl poetry sometime myself. I'd ++ this, but I'm out of votes for today

Just a couple suggestions I have for you

How about use Brains::Fantasy qw(-boundaries);, or use Brains::Fantasy;<br> no Boundries;?

Sigh is the filename of WORKTODO? How about open(WORKTODO, "tedium") and &sigh;

<strikeout>Will you please return my third point to me if you find it?</strikeout>

Ahh, yes, that was it: Your perl has a bug: unless time()==$EndOfDay. Double-equals vs single-equals will mess you up every time... sometimes, I think pascal (:=) had the right thing. (Then I snap out of it and relize how much extra typing that is, and how much I hated it when forced to use it.)

James Mastros,
Just Another Perl Initate

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Re: Re: Workday
by C-Keen (Monk) on Oct 02, 2001 at 10:06 UTC
    Thank you for your suggestions! I corrected the bug, but I decided to leave the poem the way it is, since it is my first try and it has the right to have some flaws. But of coourse your suggestions will influence all my other poems I am to create!

    Thank you,
    C-Keen