Why not? The first page talks about "traditional" Haiku.
Some seventeen sounds
within a three line Haiku,
traditionally.
The second page gives many ideas and techniques for writing Haiku that do not necessarily follow the "traditional" rules of Haiku, much like the OP.
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English haiku does not necessarily follow the 17 syllable (5-7-5) form,
(some consider 5-7-5 a mark of the beginner in English haiku, but I do
not agree with that assessment as I have seen many fine 5-7-5 examples in
English). The OP's haiku is exemplary in form and phrase and fragment: So
much so, that I wouldn't have assumed they needed any instructional links
to 'how to' pages on haiku. Sorry if I misunderstood your response, but it
struck me as similar to giving links to 'how to write perl programs' in
response to an excellently coded Perl snippet.
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