You can improve that.
my @checks = ( [ qw/0 agency_id agency_id / ], [ qw/1 advertiser advertiser / ], [ qw/2 compaign_id compaign_id / ], [ qw/3 contact_id admin_contact_id / ], [ qw/3 contact_id tech_contact_id / ], ); foreach my $check (@checks){ my( $idx, $key, $k ) = @$check; (defined $result_ref->{$k} && $result_ref->{$k} != 0) && get_updates($objects[$idx], $key, $result_ref->{$k}); }

Note that means that $result_ref->{$k} is allowed to be the empty string. If it's not, then it's better written as a simple check for boolean truth.

$result_ref->{$k} && get_updates($objects[$idx], $key, $result_ref->{$k});

In Perl6, that could look like:

my @checks = qw( 0 agency_id agency_id 1 advertiser advertiser 2 compaign_id compaign_id 3 contact_id admin_contact_id 3 contact_id tech_contact_id ); for (@checks) -> ($idx, $key, $check) { $result_ref->{$check} && get_updates( @objects[$idx], $key, $result_ref->{$check} ); }

The Perfect is the Enemy of the Good.


In reply to Re^2: How would you rewrite this? by dragonchild
in thread How would you rewrite this? by jacques

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