I see a few things, here.

First, you should always use:

use strict; use warnings; use diagnostics; # not everyone puts this in but I think it's helpful

But that's just general stuff. The big question I have is why use a while (especially with the -- eesh -- next statement) when an if is really what you want? Rewriting this using your (excellent) suggestion of the reformulated for:

foreach my $pdu_num (3 .. 8) { $pdu_num = 11 - $pdu_num unless defined $order; if (my $node = shift @nodes) { $map{$node} = $pdu . '['.$pdu_num.']'; } }

gives, I think, a much clearer chunk of code

--
Wade

In reply to Re: More effective way to increase two elements of a list in parallel? by wade
in thread More effective way to increase two elements of a list in parallel? by et_alia

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