You're using one of my pet-peeve style errors:

sub random_alignment { my $type = shift; if ($type eq 'parts') { return $parts[rand @parts]; } elsif ($type eq 'good_vs_evil') { return $good_vs_evil[rand @good_vs_evil]; } elsif ($type eq 'lawful_vs_chaotic') { return $lawful_vs_chaotic[rand @lawful_vs_chaotic]; }

After a return there can never be an else. the sub returns, so this much better reads like this:

sub random_alignment { my $type = shift; if ($type eq 'parts') { return $parts[rand @parts]; } if ($type eq 'good_vs_evil') { return $good_vs_evil[rand @good_vs_evil]; } if ($type eq 'lawful_vs_chaotic') { return $lawful_vs_chaotic[rand @lawful_vs_chaotic]; }

And personally, I'd go even further:

sub random_alignment { my $type = shift; $type eq "parts" and return $parts[rand @parts]; $type eq "good_vs_evil" and return $good_vs_evil[rand @good_vs_ +evil]; $type eq "lawful_vs_chaotic" and return $lawful_vs_chaotic[rand @law +ful_vs_chaotic];

Clean, short code. Beautiful, right?


Enjoy, Have FUN! H.Merijn

In reply to Re: Lady Aleena's first working module by Tux
in thread Lady Aleena's first working module by Lady_Aleena

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