Ignore the naysayers: I very much enjoyed your "story".

Would that all programs were as engaging! I'm not sure the metaphors used scale to more advanced programming features, but they're simple, clearly drawn, and quite easy to follow. My compliments for your creativity!

Do I have your permission to print out a copy? I'd like to show it to people offline, if that's okay with you.

I'm looking foward to reading Part II.

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Ytrew Q. Uiop