For what it's worth, I agree with you completely. The writing is hard to understand and doesn't seem to have been given very much thought or care. That said, I do still think you were a tad rude in the way you presented the brutal facts. I'm not one to harp on this point all that often, but there is certainly a way to word things with less of an edge. It may seem silly, but it can often mean the difference between someone listening to your point and someone flying into a rage and ignoring you altogether.