in reply to Please review my OSCON presentation

Hello,

Thanks for sharing! Very interesting.

Havent finished yet, but:

Slide 45: Schedule Compression
  Item 2: faster than what?
  Item 3: replace the first "it" with its name

Really non issues but would help with readability. Again, thanks. Great content.

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Re^2: Please review my OSCON presentation
by tilly (Archbishop) on Jul 17, 2008 at 09:11 UTC
    Thank you for the feedback, I've updated my slides and rewrote that one to be clearer.

    The big change is that it now has lots and lots of pictures. :-)

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      Now there are too many pictures. :-) Just kidding.
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