my first attempt at a haiku

Like many people I've had a go at writing poetry but never tried a haiku before. So here is my first attempt on the subject of Perl.

A thing of beauty

From which oyster did it spring:

This brilliant Perl?

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Re: my first attempt at a haiku by charlie_pi (Initiate) on Aug 04, 2010 at 20:03 UTC
You have a wonderful gift for poetry. Let this light shine, Friar. :-)	[reply]
Re: my first attempt at a haiku by Anonymous Monk on Jul 19, 2010 at 12:39 UTC
From which oyster did it spring: Teh mustached spectacle pinctada	[reply]