convinced

Ok, this is my first try, so bear with me

For those not in the know, Perl is a town in Germany, check out here

I once knew a coder in Perl
he was looking for the right URL
once he found these Gates
t'was all he awaits
now he's hooked on coding in perl

Edited 2001-03-25 by Ovid

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Re: convinced by Rudif (Hermit) on Mar 25, 2001 at 01:34 UTC
On a prosaic note: your href needs fixing, perhaps like here Rudif	[reply]
Re: convinced by placido (Initiate) on Mar 28, 2001 at 13:51 UTC
I really haven't laughed like that for such a long time. "URL" - Hah! =) ROFL	[reply]
Re: convinced by bladx (Chaplain) on Mar 25, 2001 at 00:33 UTC
busunl: great job for your first poetry piece!! It has some great rhymes, and makes perfectly great sense! I guess, I should tell ya a couple of 'cons' of your poem so this message isn't totally worthless, and unhelpful (by just saying: great job.) The rhyming scheme works, but is very well used already... what if you created a new scheme, or chose to use one that is less overused? Possibly think about creating a longer poem... when I wrote my first Perl poem for this section of the monastery, I didn't know what to do really, and my poem was only about 4 or 5 lines too... Well, I guess that is all the advice I have to give for ya!! Hope it helps... and keep at it!! ^_^ bladx ~ 《uchas veces tengo preguntas!	[reply]